so, i found an old story of mine thats only like a chapter long and i decided to make it live again........please, feel free to critisize (if theres a need), or comment, or even pm me if you wish. i will read what you post, and reply......so here goes nothin....(TITLE SUBJECT TO CHANGE)
FORBBIDEN FRUIT
Chapter One: The save
He walked down the street. Silently, almost sadly. he was thirsty. Yet again. He hated what he had become, all those years ago. He hated haveing to feed on humans, though he didnt kill them. Anymore, that is. It had taken him the better part of a century to figure out that his bite wouldnt change people. Or the worst, depending on how you looked at it. He didnt remember how he had been changed, so thats just what he always thought.
And now he was thirsty again, roming the street for a victim that wouldnt be to hard to get to.That wouldnt struggle.But of course the streets were completly deserted at this time of night. Except for the usual cat that is.
Ill add more tomorrow!!