Moontyde's Poetry

this jewl at which you told me i was is just a polished stone and nothing more.
this soul that you say you love is just a mist.
but when you say that you love me i fell into, i believed you.
so what am i now to you?

this heart that i once thought i was free to give is still bound to another.
but this bond i can not think of how to break. it seems too painful to do so. no matter how i am. and those whom know what and how i am will understand. this jewl that is said to be my soul is just a polished rock and this polish is fading, i can not hide any longer. this morningstar that which is held by those who have fallen is but a rock and nothing more. so this heart that i once thought mine is and has never been. so i leave it at that i have made your choice a lot easier.

My choice is chosen, you are she.
My choice is chosen, and I love thee.
I see you're shine, through your shade,
I see you're shine, it does not fade...

this light that you see is just a bright shadow

And what a brilliant one it is...

only to you

Oh no come on.....

well its true only one other person that thought that and ment it he's dead.

Then others are blind to what stands before them. If they could see as I do, they'd know the truth of the world. Trust me, I've seen some insane things in my 19 years and I've see a fraction of that number of truly beautiful people, you are easily one of them.

thanx i think i still dont see it

this is very interesting.... entertaining.......... I guess people like me do not see this kind of thing everyday..... a guy trying so hard to show something that can never be seen....

I'm... unique. How many other guys do you know who could write anywhere near as well as I do, or with as much pure emotion?

Oh dearest Luna, my sister, your poem is truly morbid and depressing, yet it reveals a concealed truth unknown to most of the world. Quite ashame that men are too foolish to see one for who one truly is. The road of truth and love is a long and hard one, one that must be traversed with care, but never alone, even when the light fades, a friend will always be by your side. Perhaps at times that friend is a favorite delacacie or a perpetual arcanist, but a friend who will always be there for you is not quite a friend but one you esteem as a brother, an old sage who will always see you as a Rhiannon.

Your's truly,

Merlin til Erethil, ArchSage of Omnius.

Apparently a wannabe....

aww thanx i still think its wrong for you to be dating kassie but its your and her problem you should come to church with me sunday night

Merlin til Erethil wrote:

Apparently a wannabe....

sorry about that, it's the ranking system in the forum, don't worry, it changes.

the love that you said would never fade is dwindling ever so much as time passes. you promised and you still have yet to live up to it. i have lost everything i have ever worked for and i lost it willingly for you. do you not see all i ever wanted was for you and me to last. but it ended really fast and it will probably never build again.




( this to one who is and forever will be the meaning for this poetry.)

More depressing poems, hurray! Mmm, I haven't been on in awhile, I appologize for meh abscence, eh wot? Hmm, all interesting to say the least, I suppose that I might as well post a poem once or twice. By the way Luna, why do you think that Kassie and I should not be together?

because YOUR LIKE A BROTHER TO ME and shes actually related to me and its just.... wierd.ok?

But, the fact remains that I am NOT your hereditary brother, though she may be related to you, you only see me as a brother though I am not. But, I suppose you can take it however you wish to.

I think that Merlin and Kass have a right to be together if they want to be it's their life they should be able to live it how they want.. That's just coming from someone who always hears complaints about the same thing....

Thanks Cookie, or whatever you prefer to be called, Chocolate Chip, Choco, Chipper, Chippy, eh something will have to work out.....

I KNOW it was just my opinion.k?

Okie Dokie.

ooooooook

I thought this was your poetry.