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evefarrel
Order Webmaster
Number of posts : 629
Age : 33
Registration date : 2008-04-29
Character
Name: Azzy
Age: 8000 (looks 11)
Race: Pixie
| | Subject: Look What Crashed Through My Wall! Tue Jul 21, 2009 4:01 pm | |
| Well I am on this 3d messenger called Cooee and they are having a contest for a Lost in Space room. So I created this: http://www.clubcooee.com/imgdb/user/37014/1b1a40efa8de48505001b02655fa0442.pngAnd wrote this story for it: This is my lost in space room. It isn't purely space though, it is an average room where a space craft broke through my wall spitting out an alien that looks like like an average caroot with a helmet. When I found him he was typing this message on my computer: This maybe my last message to my home planet of Veggy 9 from what I saw in that instant cold maker. The home creatures here kill my kind and very well eat them for all I know. I am lucky I found this primitive message sender here, I may be able to send this message before I am found. Whoever gets this message out there, tell my family I care very much for them and I am on Veggy 10 now most likely watching them from above... I hear foo--- It cuts off when I grabbed him in wonder of what he was. Tell me what you think ^^ | |
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The Dark Lord Happy Pantz
Grand Editor
Number of posts : 1511
Age : 33
Registration date : 2008-05-05
Character
Name: Turin and Allie Ryuu
Age: ??? and 18
Race: Dragon
| | Subject: Re: Look What Crashed Through My Wall! Tue Jul 21, 2009 8:25 pm | |
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evefarrel
Order Webmaster
Number of posts : 629
Age : 33
Registration date : 2008-04-29
Character
Name: Azzy
Age: 8000 (looks 11)
Race: Pixie
| | Subject: Re: Look What Crashed Through My Wall! Tue Jul 21, 2009 8:25 pm | |
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The Dark Lord Happy Pantz
Grand Editor
Number of posts : 1511
Age : 33
Registration date : 2008-05-05
Character
Name: Turin and Allie Ryuu
Age: ??? and 18
Race: Dragon
| | Subject: Re: Look What Crashed Through My Wall! Tue Jul 21, 2009 8:30 pm | |
| - evefarrel wrote:
- Is that a good weird?
i dunno maybe. | |
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evefarrel
Order Webmaster
Number of posts : 629
Age : 33
Registration date : 2008-04-29
Character
Name: Azzy
Age: 8000 (looks 11)
Race: Pixie
| | Subject: Re: Look What Crashed Through My Wall! Tue Jul 21, 2009 8:37 pm | |
| ... T_T everyone else I've asked liked it and thought it was funny for the Lost in Space contest | |
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The Dark Lord Happy Pantz
Grand Editor
Number of posts : 1511
Age : 33
Registration date : 2008-05-05
Character
Name: Turin and Allie Ryuu
Age: ??? and 18
Race: Dragon
| | Subject: Re: Look What Crashed Through My Wall! Tue Jul 21, 2009 8:40 pm | |
| - evefarrel wrote:
- ... T_T everyone else I've asked liked it and thought it was funny for the Lost in Space contest
it's clever, i don't think anyone else will think of it, but not so funny | |
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evefarrel
Order Webmaster
Number of posts : 629
Age : 33
Registration date : 2008-04-29
Character
Name: Azzy
Age: 8000 (looks 11)
Race: Pixie
| | Subject: Re: Look What Crashed Through My Wall! Tue Jul 21, 2009 8:41 pm | |
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The Dark Lord Happy Pantz
Grand Editor
Number of posts : 1511
Age : 33
Registration date : 2008-05-05
Character
Name: Turin and Allie Ryuu
Age: ??? and 18
Race: Dragon
| | Subject: Re: Look What Crashed Through My Wall! Tue Jul 21, 2009 8:47 pm | |
| - evefarrel wrote:
- Why not funny?
well, a chuckle funny, but not amazingly funny | |
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Jenu
Members
Number of posts : 413
Age : 352
Registration date : 2009-07-26
Character
Name: Rana Mizu
Age: 60-something (looks 20)
Race: Elf
| | Subject: Re: Look What Crashed Through My Wall! Sun Aug 02, 2009 10:58 pm | |
| What would be amazingly funny if he found a way to appear human even in his vegetable state to avoid being eaten, and then appeared to be discussing with various vegetables on earth randomly, and to be caught in said discussions at extraordinarily awkward moments. That's what I would do anyway. | |
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yori-chan
Council Members
Number of posts : 387
Registration date : 2008-06-16
Character
Name: Anola
Age: unknown to many
Race: Ecarian
| | Subject: Re: Look What Crashed Through My Wall! Mon Aug 03, 2009 2:57 am | |
| It is a really good idea, but not hilarious. Sorry. | |
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Jenu
Members
Number of posts : 413
Age : 352
Registration date : 2009-07-26
Character
Name: Rana Mizu
Age: 60-something (looks 20)
Race: Elf
| | Subject: Re: Look What Crashed Through My Wall! Mon Aug 03, 2009 1:13 pm | |
| So how would you make this story hilarious? | |
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Chocolate Chip Cookie
Grand Editor
Number of posts : 323
Registration date : 2009-06-10
Character
Name: Krypta
Age: ?
Race: Pixie
| | Subject: Re: Look What Crashed Through My Wall! Wed Aug 05, 2009 8:05 pm | |
| I would make him eat something and get it all over him.... or something like that lol... maybe he walks funny and has a weird accent and starts asking for pudding | |
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Jenu
Members
Number of posts : 413
Age : 352
Registration date : 2009-07-26
Character
Name: Rana Mizu
Age: 60-something (looks 20)
Race: Elf
| | Subject: Re: Look What Crashed Through My Wall! Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:21 pm | |
| Hmm...that would be funny too I suppose. | |
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yori-chan
Council Members
Number of posts : 387
Registration date : 2008-06-16
Character
Name: Anola
Age: unknown to many
Race: Ecarian
| | Subject: Re: Look What Crashed Through My Wall! Mon Aug 17, 2009 3:23 pm | |
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