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Guest
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| | Subject: Hey. Tue Aug 18, 2009 6:22 pm | |
| Hey, Cattie-Brie here. I won't tell you who I am in reality but I would appreciate it if you guys would check out my poems and give me some cronstructive feedback. Thanks. |
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The Dark Lord Happy Pantz
Grand Editor
Number of posts : 1511
Age : 33
Registration date : 2008-05-05
Character
Name: Turin and Allie Ryuu
Age: ??? and 18
Race: Dragon
| | Subject: Re: Hey. Tue Aug 18, 2009 6:45 pm | |
| - Cattie-Brie wrote:
- Hey, Cattie-Brie here. I won't tell you who I am in reality but I would appreciate it if you guys would check out my poems and give me some cronstructive feedback. Thanks.
hey, happy belated welcome | |
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yori-chan
Council Members
Number of posts : 387
Registration date : 2008-06-16
Character
Name: Anola
Age: unknown to many
Race: Ecarian
| | Subject: Re: Hey. Wed Aug 19, 2009 9:27 am | |
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Raiga Olir
Members
Number of posts : 475
Age : 33
Registration date : 2008-05-01
Character
Name: Cala Rive
Age: looks 30 (is immortal)
Race: Elf
| | Subject: Re: Hey. Wed Aug 19, 2009 2:34 pm | |
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Jenu
Members
Number of posts : 413
Age : 352
Registration date : 2009-07-26
Character
Name: Rana Mizu
Age: 60-something (looks 20)
Race: Elf
| | Subject: Re: Hey. Wed Aug 19, 2009 9:41 pm | |
| Hello! I will be glad to read your poetry in the poetry section!
^_^" I hope you don't mind if I point out some helpful tips. I'm a bit of a critique but I never mean to be offensive in my critique, so I hope I don't offend you by responding critically to your poetry. (critically meaning analyticaly, not harshly) | |
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yori-chan
Council Members
Number of posts : 387
Registration date : 2008-06-16
Character
Name: Anola
Age: unknown to many
Race: Ecarian
| | Subject: Re: Hey. Wed Aug 19, 2009 10:26 pm | |
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Jenu
Members
Number of posts : 413
Age : 352
Registration date : 2009-07-26
Character
Name: Rana Mizu
Age: 60-something (looks 20)
Race: Elf
| | Subject: Re: Hey. Thu Aug 20, 2009 6:27 pm | |
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hempy
Council Members
Number of posts : 741
Age : 1932
Registration date : 2008-05-27
Character
Name: Phaie Faese
Age: old as existance-ish
Race: Golem
| | Subject: Re: Hey. Thu Aug 20, 2009 7:40 pm | |
| I don't think I've seen her post besides this.
*whispers* Is she dead? | |
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yori-chan
Council Members
Number of posts : 387
Registration date : 2008-06-16
Character
Name: Anola
Age: unknown to many
Race: Ecarian
| | Subject: Re: Hey. Fri Aug 21, 2009 5:24 pm | |
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Jenu
Members
Number of posts : 413
Age : 352
Registration date : 2009-07-26
Character
Name: Rana Mizu
Age: 60-something (looks 20)
Race: Elf
| | Subject: Re: Hey. Fri Aug 21, 2009 7:52 pm | |
| Perhaps she just grew bored with it...idk. I've done that a couple times. I'll introduce myself on a forum, then look through some of the stuff and decided I didn't really like it so I just kinda disappeared from it. | |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: Hey. Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:03 am | |
| @ Jenu: I was hoping everyone would give me feedback and I personally don't care how harsh it is.
@ Yori-Chan: Yes I have already posted in the poetry section. Few have replied so far. |
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Chocolate Chip Cookie
Grand Editor
Number of posts : 323
Registration date : 2009-06-10
Character
Name: Krypta
Age: ?
Race: Pixie
| | Subject: Re: Hey. Wed Aug 26, 2009 8:26 pm | |
| NICE TO FINALLY MEET YOU LOLZ | |
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Jenu
Members
Number of posts : 413
Age : 352
Registration date : 2009-07-26
Character
Name: Rana Mizu
Age: 60-something (looks 20)
Race: Elf
| | Subject: Re: Hey. Thu Aug 27, 2009 11:43 am | |
| AH! *goes to look in poetry section* | |
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