kikyos poem

Its funny how you can love
someone so much and yet never fully
understand why. Its like wanting something and
neverfully knowing why you want it so bad. Thats
how i felt. Everytime i was around him i
wanted so much just to be loved.
But i never got it. Yet as soon as i
turned my back he was loving someone else.
I dont understand why i kept going back to him.
He had something on me i guess.
I tried moving on i really did. Or was i just trying
to convince myself that i was. Either way it didnt work.
I needed love and soon but he wouldnt show me love.
He said "i want things to work but i dont love you."
So i said "i dont want anything to do with you anymore."
And i walked away. That was the last time i ever seen him and
i want to keep it that way. Because i have moved on for good.

If this is true, then you and I have more in common then I thought.

GOODBYE
i dont understand how
i dont understand why
how everytime you break my heart
i break down and cry
you did this to me once
you did this to me twice
im tired of you sayin sorry
im tired of bein to nice
you say you'll change
i say you can try
you wipe the tear from my eye
i say this time i mean it were done
GOODBYE

woah....i like it

...>.> Is this what happened to you magician? Sorta?

To a degree. Only one breakup per person, I rarely give second chances to anyone...

Ah. Girl's aren't like that then I suppose. Still, that really sux.

Eve got lucky. She didn't like my first GF and almost gave me the metaphorical shove for it.
My GF however saw how much the loss of one of my oldest friends was hurting me and left so that I could save said friendship and the peace of G.E.E.K.
I had pretty much accepted the fact that things were done, but... Well, Eve got lucky.

...who's eve??

Jenu wrote:

...who's eve??

she's hardly on anymore, but she's the girl with the username evefarrel. Eve and magician are best friends in real life

Ah, ok.

*kinda wishes I had a guy friend w/o a boyfriend...sigh...*

I really like the poem.

I've read better, but it is very good.

day passed
night comes
no ones here
your alone
thoughts creep
they start to sink
as they are
you start crying
crying tears of pain
pain from the hurt he caused
pain in the heart
pain in the soul
you grab the knief
but the tears are making it hard to see
next thing you knw the knief falls to the floor
you hear footsteps coming twards the door
you run
run fast
not knowing whats coming
what will happen next....

Anoooooo..... what happened to create this poem??

They are all really good. i like the second one best.

oh wow..... this is all very good poetry... thanks kikyo

I like all your poetry. The last one you've posted is my favorite.

It is really good...but I kinda want to know what happened... o.o

The world may never know!!!

Tootsie pop reference, lol!

Eh??

You know, "How many licks would it take to get to the center of a tootsie pop the world may never know"

Also,
@Jenu: Maybe she wants it to stay a mystery.

OH!!! That one, lol!

Perhaps, but I am an insatiably curious person. XD

rose
The boy ask you to kiss him
you say no
He gives you a rose
you say YES.
You find the boy dead
the rose
it is bleeding
the color hanged
BLACK
the kiss of death
you are willing
you lay your head on his chest
the rose in your hand
you close your eyes
the rose stops bleeding
it is no longer black
but red
full of life
full of love
and ful of death.

Lies & Promises
from day one i thought you loved me.
then as time past and slipped away
you told me little things thinking
i would stay. you said you loved me,
hat you needed me,
and tha your couldnt live without me.
you lied and broke promises. you
promisedd methat we would always be together forever.
you could never commit to one person for to long.
you told me that i was your one and only. that you would die
without me. well we both know that, that was a lie. because you still alive and well... dating.
i dont know why you lied but it hurt me and tore me apart
well im tired of your lies
and promises.
So leave me ALONE and just stay away.